Benjamin David Poet Rhyme

Dreamer

I close my eyes, then I drift away
Into the magic night I softly say. 
A silent hope like dreamers do
Then I fall asleep to dreams of you

I open my eyes to a morning ray 
And into the light I softly say;
Beauty is light in sparkled view, 
And all I see is forever you

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Skat A June 18, 2013 at 10:10 AM Good afternoon Benjamin, wow, I open my eyes to a morning ray, ----softly say. a very beautiful line. I wish to be like the dreamer in this poem. and find that forever feeling when it comes to love. nice imagery. *luv ~ SKAT ~

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl June 18, 2013 at 4:03 AM This is lovely Benjamin and it flows so well xx

Flora Kelsey May 9, 2013 at 10:00 AM wow that is great keep this up coz i want to hear more! u r great!