Dreamer

Dreamer

no dreams to be achevied
I watch as they pass
sit back too indifferent to act
no expectations no failure
no loss no shame
no goals or aspirations to name
no pain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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May 7, 2016 at 2:47 AM
Jack daniels, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT*
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April 29, 2016 at 11:57 PM
Jack daniels, Well done. Glad to read your poem today. :) Love -LINDA-
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August 9, 2012 at 5:26 AM
A belated welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Jack. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol 08/09/2012
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August 7, 2012 at 8:17 AM
nice poem :)
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