Demetrios Trifiatis Poet Quatrain

Dreamed To Be An Eagle

A dream I had last night

So vivid and so true,

An Eagle I was, flying

Over places I knew


My wings had stretched wide 

To lift me to the sky 

To view beauty from above 

As far as could see, my eye


I soared over mountains 

And valleys of green

Such splendor and such beauty 

My soul had never seen
 

Uninterruptedly for hours

Through the air I just flew 

Enjoying every second

Till the dawn near drew


Then I opened my eyes

And saw human still to be 

Saddened my heart I found  

For wasn’t as the Eagle free!*







 © Demetrios Trifiatis
      17 May 2016

 
 *I am writing on birds today for a special project!
   Will return to my usual style.

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Andrea Dietrich May 17, 2016 at 3:30 PM that would be ONE awesome dream to have. I miss my flying dreams of the past. And to be an eagle. Wow! Demetrios Trifiatis May 18, 2016 at 6:15 PM I love it when I dream flying! Such a feeling! Who knows next life will be my choice to be an eagle! Haha! Thank you dearest, Andrea!

Anne-Lise Andresen May 17, 2016 at 7:56 AM - A delightful dream, dear Demetrios - Beautiful poems, a 7 :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Demetrios Trifiatis May 17, 2016 at 8:07 AM Yes, yes, this is marvelous! How many times was I dreaming of flying when as a child was climbing the mountains of my village called "EAGLE". Thank you dearest, Anne-Lise for your visit and generosity. Hugs!

Alexis Y. May 17, 2016 at 2:42 AM Hi Demetrios, What a beautiful dream. It was such a lovely flight with amazing imagery. That would be something to be as free as the eagle in this well written piece. An undeniable 7- Alexis Demetrios Trifiatis May 17, 2016 at 7:14 AM I always marveled the Eagle. The village I was born bears is named after the bird: Eagle! Thank you for liking it dear, Alexis!

Richard Lamoureux May 17, 2016 at 2:22 AM It's good to mix it up Demetrios. I enjoyed flying with you. Demetrios Trifiatis May 17, 2016 at 7:16 AM I think you are right my friend, Richard but at my age is better to pass messages that might make someone think for I have no time to write long poems, on the other hand there are so many much better poets than me that my contribution is not missed! Thank you!

Jill Spagnola May 17, 2016 at 2:01 AM `SWEET `7...flying dreams are the best and I do not think you should go back to any "usual style"...cause I really dig this, my wise friend of hidden talents!!This is such a beautiful quatrain that stirs up such awesome imagery of a minute in a Eagle's adventures, peaceful day!!Bravo, Bravo!! Demetrios Trifiatis May 17, 2016 at 7:18 AM Mille grazie, Jill! I try to contribute the way I am able to, dear friend. Thank you so much for your generosity and your sweet comment! Thank you!

John Fleming May 17, 2016 at 1:46 AM Nicely conceived idea, Demetrios - I enjoyed the flight! My very best regards, as always, and my warmest wishes. Cheers! :) john Demetrios Trifiatis May 17, 2016 at 7:19 AM John, my friend, how lovely to see you! Thank you for visiting and commenting in such a warm way!

Lewis Nyaga May 17, 2016 at 1:28 AM An enjoyable write on eagles Demetrios.. Demetrios Trifiatis May 17, 2016 at 7:21 AM Ah, Lewis, I am delighted with your visit and comment dear, friend. Thank you!