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Dreambubble

Fluid refreshing i'm home dreaming I know My next lifetime I would be so blessed this spirit world so simple so free no bones hurting no shame the fat no longer holding me back no hate or blame my mind so clear so forgiving sigh in one more dip this dream is ending I know I ask how do you get here I want to come back I know its a dream but so real thankful for this wonderful vacay

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Gayle Rodd

Date: 8/16/2017 6:50:00 PM

Oh my, this is indeed a dark verse. I can only hope if this was written from personal experience and reflection that you were able to rise above it.

Sally Zaragoza
Date: 8/16/2017 9:18:00 PM

Are you commenting on hell today? I think that did come from a dark place that haunts me every couple of months, and writing here is helping me release and reflect. I also enjoy reading poems from the other members. Thank you for you comments.

Gayle Rodd

Date: 8/16/2017 6:42:00 PM

Very nice. I 'floated' along in this dreamy verse.

Sally Zaragoza
Date: 8/16/2017 9:14:00 PM

Thank you, I hoped to capture the sensation I felt while i was in the dream and of course when I woke up. The dreams I have in water are so liberating and wonderful, nothing real just true freedom.