Sally Zaragoza Poet Free verse

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Fluid
refreshing 
i'm home 
dreaming I know
My next lifetime
I would be so blessed
this spirit world
so simple so free
no bones hurting
no shame
the fat no longer holding me back
no hate or blame
my mind so clear 
so forgiving
sigh in 
one more dip
this dream is ending I know
I ask how do you get here 
I want to come back 
I know its a dream
but so real 
thankful for this wonderful
vacay

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Gayle Rodd August 16, 2017 at 6:50 PM Oh my, this is indeed a dark verse. I can only hope if this was written from personal experience and reflection that you were able to rise above it. Sally Zaragoza August 16, 2017 at 9:18 PM Are you commenting on hell today? I think that did come from a dark place that haunts me every couple of months, and writing here is helping me release and reflect. I also enjoy reading poems from the other members. Thank you for you comments.

Gayle Rodd August 16, 2017 at 6:42 PM Very nice. I 'floated' along in this dreamy verse. Sally Zaragoza August 16, 2017 at 9:14 PM Thank you, I hoped to capture the sensation I felt while i was in the dream and of course when I woke up. The dreams I have in water are so liberating and wonderful, nothing real just true freedom.