Dream You

When I saw you standing at my door that night
I didn’t know what to think, or say, or do
I just stood there in awe and adornment

You smiled at me and I tried not to blush
I tried not to reveal my true feelings
I hoped you wouldn’t see that I wanted you

You read my face; you saw my heart; you knew
Before I could turn away you came to me
You took my hand and stopped me from running

Your lips met mine and in that perfect moment 
The entire Universe was frozen
Everything else disappeared as we united

You were perfect; I was perfect, we were
We were both perfectly connected and
My life was yours; your life was mine; our life

In that one kiss my whole life flashed before me
Joy, excitement, passion, thrill, happiness, Love
All emotions swirling around in my head 

And then I woke up holding my pillow; 
I guess I didn’t know it was a dream.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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January 16, 2015 at 12:25 AM
Nilo, thank you for the wonderful reply. ((regarding the bottom reply))
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January 10, 2015 at 5:21 PM
Thank you for the great welcome, Linda! I just finished school and haven't been able to post much poetry on here but now that I am on the hunt for a career, I plan to be more involved in the PoetrySoup community. Thank you again for your encouragement! Nilo
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May 27, 2014 at 7:19 PM
ps.... I enjoyed your poem, sad to wake up and realize it was only a dream, however it was a sweet passionate dream. Nilo, it's a nice feeling, when I find new poets reading my poems. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem Indian Ink... I will keep an eye, out for you, and hope you grow and post many more poems. hugs...Linda
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January 10, 2015 at 5:22 PM
Thank you for the great welcome, Linda! I just finished school and haven't been able to post much poetry on here but now that I am on the hunt for a career, I plan to be more involved in the PoetrySoup community. Thank you again for your encouragement! Nilo
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May 27, 2014 at 7:04 PM
Hello Nilo, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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