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Dream With Me

As I lay down, my strength belonging to another day, I closed my eyes to soon open them, and see a pair looking my way, There were close, dark, and lovely, They belonged to a woman, who smiled and said, "dream with me." "Where will we stay?", and I dreamed of a lovely home, One with space, warmth from a fireplace, "Will we be alone?", and I dreamed of children, in our house they roamed, Always smiling, scheming, eager to race, "Will we worry?", and I dreamed of wealth, falling from the sky, We gathered it as a family, and gave to those that needed. "Will you make me cry?", and I dreamed of her smile, Life's hand would only cause tears, emotions I treated. "How will we perish?", and I dreamed of being old together, We lay surrounded by loved ones, our souls close to forever. "Take my hand", and I reached out her way, I closed my eyes to soon open them, a pair not looking back, As I arose to give my strength to another day, I held close to my heart and mind, the dream I chase; a reality I lack.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/13/2016 11:58:00 PM
CLINTON, Fantastic writing, glad to read your poem tonight. Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/12/2016 9:36:00 AM
Clinton, creative and well done. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**
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Date: 3/15/2016 2:24:00 PM
This was a thoroughly enjoyable read. I love your thoughts on strength given to other days. I seem to face many of these. A thought: the word 'there' introducing the third line doesn't seem to be the one you intended.
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Clinton Dofredo-Wyatt
Date: 3/15/2016 2:55:00 PM
Thanks! And you're right. It was supposed to be *they instead of "there". Thanks for pointing that out. Just another thing to improve upon.

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