Dream Walking

Clouds are dancing
the slowest waltz
my heart beat slows
as does gestalt 

an umber light
glows in the ground,
without making
the smallest sound 

Trees swaying
out of time
and rivers flow
without a rhyme 

eyes grow heavy
head falls beyond,
a violin sings
a break in the pond

as chariots on waves
start rolling in,
the dreamtime faded
and reality set in 

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Johnson Avatar
September 8, 2011 at 7:03 AM
found another Aussie mate, on this site, great poem relates, keep on writing Jayne....Don
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October 20, 2010 at 7:03 AM
this is awesome, Jayne. Harry
Dietrich Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 8:59 PM
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October 19, 2010 at 8:51 PM
Hey, that IS very dreamlike Jayne. So you were in the hosptial, huh? thanks for your newsy comments and how cool your dad is a Hallween baby!
Bloomsfield Avatar
October 18, 2010 at 4:54 AM
lovely again!Celene
Hilliker Avatar
October 18, 2010 at 3:20 AM
The ending is beautiful. Great write.
Hilliker Avatar
October 18, 2010 at 3:20 AM
The ending is beautiful. Great write.
Brown Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 7:09 AM
Starting my weekend early reading all the amazing poetry of all the wonderful poets here at PoetrySoup. I am so happy to find your poetry posted here this morning Jayne. Have a wonderful weekend and I hope you find tons of inspiration along the way as Fall is upon us. Love, Carol
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