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Erotic plain and simple.

DREAM VISITOR

DREAM VISITOR
Welcome intruder of my private world
visiting me at the twilight of my sleep
finishing with me into the deep slumber.

Satisfying me into completeness
dream visitor, you have come again
to ravish me and to make me shy.

I see your shadow, I feel your presence
about me, you live inside me, lay atop of
my nudity, arousing sensuous stimuli,
causing spontaneous imploding- and tremors.!

My senses go haywire, starting a-fire, I am now lit.
You then let me shoulder in all that you have
induced. I lie there, desire-ring nothing-
squirming in tranquility.

Upon awakening I am shy, As I appear
to you in reality, somehow you have to know.
My brain has scattered as I fold-up like a
Chinese-fan before your very eyes

I run away when I see you in the day.
Afraid that my eyes may reveal, or betray me;
You must know, you were there in spirit and it seems.
In daylight you mock me.

When your spirit visits my dreams, it is impossible
that we are not both inclined, to have arrive at this apex
same time; Are you my coitus ghost?
fulfilling me to the utmost.?

In reality, when I see you, I lose all my of my faculties.
I avoid you in the daytime too; Upon laying eyes on you.
I forget what I came to say or do. If I look at you;
Immediately sensations rush through.

The fact of the matter is, like a school-girl I am flattered
At the twilight of my sleep you enter. As you ignite and
quell fires in me, ecstatically overwhelmed- You finish me.
leaving me conquered by your rapture' visitor.

O' intruder of my slumber- O' Dream visitor of mine.
I gain control by staying busy all the day;
wanting to exhaust myself - Thus the only way to
prevent your visit, I must, and keep you beyond
the barriers of my deep slumber.

Tonight, I deeply sleep, becoming totally
in-cognizant; You will need consent.
I must not lose control of my dreams.
I cannot lose control of my dreams to
this ravenous intruder who satisfies me beyond reality.!

Tonight, your spirit will not demand my flesh-
I wild hide behind the sound wall of exhaustion.
Even though I have never known such contentment,
O’ prowess of Morpheus. O' dream intruder-
the morning after is too confounding!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 10/23/2014 11:22:00 PM
Oh my Vicki, what a brilliant piece of work this is! I am so happy it was featured and I happened to read it. Congratulations! I hope many others have the opportunity to read this #7 poem. Blessings, Connie
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Vicki Acquah
Date: 11/2/2014 10:19:00 PM
I read this now with music / thanks for bringing this to my attention.the feedback is helpful, sometimes we do not know when a poem is good to others ..and of course poets love all their poems,so it really means a lot. Thank you.
Date: 10/21/2014 3:59:00 AM
Thank You for featuring this Poem @poetrysoup. And Thank you Pandita Sanchez for sometimes it just takes one to know one.
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Date: 6/8/2014 9:54:00 AM
This is a wonderfully written poem and so beautiful! I really enjoyed reading another of your gems!
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Vicki Acquah
Date: 6/8/2014 7:34:00 PM
So gracious you are, thank you for your comments and Also connecting with your delightful poetry as well
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