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dream vacation

dream vacation dawns
sunrise on malibu beach
~ heartbeat longs for love



AP: Honorabke Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 3, 2025 at 4:34 PM
you captured a beautiful scene and emotion with this poem. Loved it
Gauthier Avatar
September 3, 2025 at 5:26 PM
Thanks, Sara ~ much appreciated
Crandall Avatar
September 3, 2025 at 4:01 PM
Ah - Malibu! This poem resonates - most of my adult life lived in and around Santa Monica, so I've many Malibu memories, including a first date with my first girlfriend.
Gauthier Avatar
September 3, 2025 at 5:26 PM
That's wonderful, David ~ sounds exotic to the rest of us
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