Dream Theme Andaree

Dream Theme Andaree

                          Come listen how the thunder rolls with its might
                            Like distant drums it echoes through the night
                                        Rain has pulsed a steady stream
                                                To ponder and dream
                                                           Create a
                                                             Theme
                                                         For my dream
                                                  Listening to the sound
                                            Like the rhythmn in a round
	                             I have captured my dream by daylight
                               Come listen how the thunder rolls with its might
                     Andareee Contest Andrea Dietrich  (late entry) October 16, 2015
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Cresswell Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 8:00 AM
You should have been here yesterday afternoon. It was your poem in real life. Magnificent!
Sergi Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 7:34 PM
Thank you, Patricia: I'm gearing up for Hurricane Irma here in Florida, if that's what you are talking about.
Dietrich Avatar
October 18, 2015 at 7:57 PM
sorry this was too late for the contest, my friend. I think it would probably have made top ten!
Dunn Avatar
October 18, 2015 at 11:58 AM
Dear Ralph This reminds me of the light rain just before the storm, than it clashes against the seas of the natural world lighting up the skys, sorry went inspirational on you love the poem, and good luck in the contest my friend and love the love, my adopted sister is Italian, and when they give someone a hug it takes a while to recomer afterwards, I'll tell you OMG, LOL CHERI
Sergi Avatar
October 18, 2015 at 3:57 PM
Thank you very much, Cheri If its ok with you, I'm going to steal your line about recovering from an Italian hug. I like that.
Sergi Avatar
October 18, 2015 at 8:04 AM
Thanks, Michael: Unfortunately, I was a late entry and was excluded. Stuff happens but I enjoyed attempting this form.
Tor Avatar
October 17, 2015 at 10:03 PM
Ralph this was Masterly done my friend. I think it would do very well in the contest.
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