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Dream Streams

Shallow ,transient fearfully blue ingnorant eyes images untrue. Trouble,torment a different hue stains that shame dull yet new. It's a daydream,awake a nightmare asleep It's not as it seems what does it mean? Brooding,pensive selfless sincere a meaningless pursuit clothes inner fear. This troubled mind symmetrical haze transient thoughts an everlasting maze. It's a daydream,awake a nightmare asleep It's not as it seems what does it mean? Fears unsaid effort stillborn clarify contracts notions forlorn. A sensory vision impromptu,unbidden nowhere to hide nothing now hidden. It's a daydream,awake a nightmare asleep It's not as it seems what does it mean?

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Craig Cornish

Date: 7/10/2017 2:59:00 PM

Much enjoyed Brian and as Henry Higgins once said "By God, I think she's got it!" And yes, I think the rhyming helps pull it all together.

Brian Strand
Date: 7/10/2017 3:53:00 PM

Thanks Craig, not quite in Antonio's league.His lyrics bears closer study in regard to the syllabic and other poetic techniques he incorporates.Watch this space as the saying goes

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/10/2017 11:32:00 AM

Your lyrical verses add much to this lovely poem, full of mind-ponderings!

Brian Strand
Date: 7/10/2017 11:43:00 AM

Thanks Kim, my first attempt using the inspiration of the eclectic, word col!age in a stream of consciousness style of the song mentioned in Craig's latest blog