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Dream Space

Light as grace is feathery-soft green trellis.
Lush canopy-charmed, sweet embellish
does embrace my eager face 
while glad fingers trace
my dream leaves
space.
Perfect peace
in willows grand place
where fantasies freely race
thru splendid majesty I relish.
Light as grace is feathery-soft green trellis.

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Skat A Date: 10/21/2015 9:30:00 PM CayCay, Wonderful win.................. SKAT Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 10/18/2015 4:46:00 PM Loved your 'dream space,' CayCay. Beautiful imagery. Congrats on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 10/18/2015 2:58:00 PM Dropping back with my congrats CayCay:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/17/2015 9:01:00 PM Caycay, your rhymes were not always exact. That is the only reason this is lower than it should be. the imagery is outstanding!! congrats in my contest. Login to Reply

James Inman Date: 10/6/2015 8:16:00 AM I want to live in your dream space, CayCay. Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 10/6/2015 11:50:00 PM What a sweet comment. I once wrote a Weeping Willow poem about it being the perfect tree house, only I'd want to live under the splendid branches. Thank you, James ... CayCay

Kp Nunez Date: 10/6/2015 5:54:00 AM Wow. Splendid word choice and such a perfect shape. Dreamy...I expect a high placement! hugs! Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 10/6/2015 11:49:00 PM Wow is my favorite - don't know why, but I love getting a wow. Thank you so much, Kim, for your encouraging comments ... CayCay

Constance La France Date: 10/5/2015 6:04:00 PM Caycay, oh so beautifully penned for the contest, a feathery 7 ~/ Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 10/6/2015 11:48:00 PM Thank you so much for your uplifting and kind words. I know that you will write a beautiful entry ... CayCay

Paul Callus Date: 10/5/2015 4:45:00 PM I tried this form once before, but somehow went out of point:( You appear to have followed the rules well, and the content is pleasurable. gl in the contest, CayCay! Regards // paul Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 10/6/2015 11:47:00 PM My printer isn't working so I carefully copied the directions word for word and consulted them often - it is challenging. I am so glad you enjoyed it and told me so ... CayCay

Michael Tor Date: 10/5/2015 4:17:00 PM CayCay very difficult form to master. You have done this very well. Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 10/6/2015 11:46:00 PM Oh, Michael - thank you so very much, very, very ... CayCay

Jan Allison Date: 10/5/2015 3:54:00 PM you penned this so beautifully Caycay I still haven't started mine - it is quite a challenging form:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 10/6/2015 11:45:00 PM Jan, your compliments have such matter and meaning to me - thank you. I know you will pen an absolutely beautiful poem and I look forward to enjoying it ... CayCay