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Dream Queen

She stars on the stage of my dream state production, willowy and graceful, a vision in motion. I reach to touch her familiarity, in a place beyond the veil, for there was a time in reality, she was my living queen.

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Date: 3/18/2024 5:04:00 PM
I felt twinges of sadness as I read your poem...I liked your subtle reference to the veil hiding reality (may not have been your intention). Anyway I your poem was touching and splendidly done. Have a pleasant evening, Sara
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Mark Hughes
Date: 3/19/2024 6:13:00 AM
Thanks for your visit Sara! I used "beyond the veil" suggests a realm or barrier between two states or dimension between the living and the dead.

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