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Dream Perfection

Everything now made was once shattered, and only broken objects can be gathered. To reach perfection efforts may look faded, but hiked determination gets the dream upgraded

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M Braimah Saaka

Date: 8/20/2017 5:11:00 PM

Very well thought out verse. I enjoyed it!

James Edward Lee Sr.

Date: 8/9/2017 7:26:00 PM

Beautiful verse, don't stop the words let them flow from your soul and heart. Welcome again to Poetry Soup :D ---James

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 8/1/2017 3:11:00 AM

And one more thing, seems like you re new here, so a very warm wrlcome to you on poetrysoup, may you enjoy your long stay here and whenever you post a new poem, don t forget to tell me, I ll be more than happy to read them

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 8/1/2017 3:09:00 AM

A very beautiful written poem, dreams aren t whi h we see at night, in fact dreams are what we want and we believe that we have the potential of achieving it,nothing can be achieved without hardwork, hardwork is the key to success.and no one is perfect, just find your strengths and go for them, anyway I want you to read my poem i ve brought the permission from the God to love you and the last love letter to your girlfriend and tell me how they are, I ll really appreciate it

Funom Makama

Date: 5/23/2016 1:03:00 PM

A warm welcome to poetry soup. This is indeed an excellent piece you've written. The potential to become a super douper is in you and I hope we get to read more of such great pieces.

Jombo Sandra
Date: 5/23/2016 3:24:00 PM

Thanks a bunch..