Dream or a sign?

Would you be willing to meet the younger you?" 
asked a man with a glare enthralling and eyes blue.

Said, can make my past choices wiser, 
sounded like the most sagacious advisor.

Was not an opportunity that could be missed, 
could forgo all to give my younger self a bit of assist.

Thence, appeared in front of the 19-year-old me, 
was astounding to see the little girl happy and free.

She wasn't startled at who I was but at how I looked, 
was the sad and gloomy aura that had her shook.

She could see the pain in my eyes, 
the pain of telling myself all those lies.

That how happy I was, doing my job, 
that I never wanted to be at the top.

How living every day does not hurt to the core, 
how it's very easy to get some sleep before 4:00.

How seeing my wasted potential, heart doesn't sink, how it's never tempting to get high and drink.

In that pin drop silence, no words exchanged.
Little girl just kept staring, all contained.

No explaining no hearing, just eyes spoke.
The fear became very real, no joke.

She very much understood what not to do, 
that woman was nowhere near the plan she drew.

Sigh of relief after grasping, it was just a dream.
Maybe not, but too scared to find out it seems.
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Harp Avatar
November 21, 2024 at 6:14 AM
“In that pin drop silence”… magical phrases here. Great images to express meeting with younger self. Oh, if we could just redo those years! I really enjoyed this well-crafted poem.
A'Hern Avatar
November 20, 2024 at 10:46 AM
Hi Bhavini, excellent choice to face a younger you. I thoroughly enjoyed every word, your description of the meeting had me watching from the sidelines. Thank you for sharing.
Perna Avatar
November 19, 2024 at 7:37 PM
Excellent message. I can totally relate!
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 19, 2024 at 11:22 AM
Hello Bhavini, i have read all of your poems posted here. All are lovely. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Gifford Avatar
November 19, 2024 at 7:14 AM
This is a wonderful poem, loved the idea. Beautifully written,Bhavini. Enjoy your day.
Agustin Avatar
June 8, 2024 at 12:36 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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June 15, 2024 at 8:42 PM
Thanks for this warm message, Beata, really appreciate it! :)
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