Dream On

DREAM ON 
 
I dream on, from my dome to my chest
to my toes and to the tips of my palms. 
We dream on, in the land of the free,  
but where freedom comes at a cost and 
sacrifice for others the achieve their dream. 
  
I dream on, flying over an icy mountain top,  
To the sweat taste of lemon drops,  
To the cool relief of mist burning over a  
desert black top as I brain storm lessoning 
to heart beat of my favorite song.
  
We dream on, from the top of 
lonely tropical island hill top  
to the sit and the smell of a breath
taking Forrest and to a falling
sun afflicting a shining sea
that is the best part of the day 
I rather spend ending enjoying with a beautiful
woman... the sit and the breeze. 
 
Poetry by Keith K. Relf
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Courtney Avatar
July 2, 2012 at 11:22 PM
thats real pretty
Williams Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 11:30 AM
Keith congrats on your win, breath it in..David
Relf Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 1:34 PM
thanks :)
Dietrich Avatar
June 28, 2012 at 2:42 PM
GREAT ways to relax. Very nice poem, Keith and big congrats to you.
Relf Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 1:35 PM
thank you :)
Johnson Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 8:38 PM
You know how to enjoy relaxation. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Relf Avatar
June 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the grad :D
Brown Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 12:05 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Keith. Love, Carol
Relf Avatar
June 28, 2012 at 12:02 AM
thank you , C. Browm
Richards Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 8:59 AM
As you dream on....you have invited us to this dreamy poem! Thank you!!
Relf Avatar
June 28, 2012 at 12:04 AM
thank you
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 1:24 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Keith xx
Relf Avatar
June 28, 2012 at 12:03 AM
thanks
Grisetti Avatar
June 26, 2012 at 8:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem winning. Thanks for sharing.
Kendrick Avatar
May 18, 2012 at 6:57 PM
Good work..Enjoyed reading..Congrats on your win..Sara
Brown Avatar
May 17, 2012 at 2:35 PM
Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Any Dedication" contest Keith. Love, Carol
Relf Avatar
May 17, 2012 at 3:41 PM
thanks for positive comment, Carol.
Taylor Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 3:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Keith. Excellent. Nice going. Ralph
Relf Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 3:59 PM
wow.. i am almost surprised... my hard work paid off, that was one of my best poems, thank you.
Williams Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 1:26 AM
Keith congrats on your win..David
Relf Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 11:48 AM
really? wow thanks, the sky is the limit from here !
A   Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 12:12 AM
KEITH, congratulations with your wonderful entry. Tank you for supporting my contest. Every entry was lovely in it's own way and deep for the occasion. Good night, ;-) PD
Relf Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 11:50 AM
wow this is too much... thanks, the sky is the limit from her!
Brown Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 9:56 AM
A pleasure to read your poetry today Keith. I will try to come back later this week to read more. I have a spring cold and not up to reading for too long. Have a wonderful week. Love, Carol
Andresen Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 6:16 AM
Very good dream poem Keith, have a lovely flying.... - oxox hugs Anne-Lise
Relf Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 1:30 PM
thanks
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