Lin Lane Poet Rhyme

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           Let's Minichu on Dreams Contest

Sponsor: Mohan Chutani     October 25, 2023

Dream On

Each night I lie sleeping
I dream of wondrous places in a reverie
Hopes leaping

Floating on clouds
Til daybreak washes over me
No crowds

Dream on
Sunlight, I see
Dawn

Each night I lie sleeping
Til daybreak washes over me
Dawn

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Sara Kendrick November 24, 2023 at 7:41 AM Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Keep on writing. Sara K

John Lawless October 26, 2023 at 2:50 PM You made this form look easy....very nice job Lin Lin Lane October 27, 2023 at 4:49 AM Morning, John. It does take some thought and rearranging to make this form sound cohesive. Thank you for recognizing it can be a challenge.

Jay Narain October 26, 2023 at 11:01 AM Sweet dreams lyrics. Loved it. Lin Lane October 27, 2023 at 4:47 AM Thanks for your thoughts, Jay.

Tom Cunningham October 26, 2023 at 10:03 AM Nothing beats a good night's sleep with pleasant dreams. Good luck in the contest Lin. Tom Lin Lane October 27, 2023 at 4:47 AM I can't remember when I've had a good night's sleep and good dreams. Thanks, Tom.

Jan Allison October 25, 2023 at 3:30 PM aww sweet dreams Lin, wish I could sleep well but being away from home is challenging as you can imagine at the moment:-) hugs Jan xx Lin Lane October 25, 2023 at 3:38 PM I know, but just a couple more days and you'll be home. Courage, chick. Hugs.