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Dream On

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           Let's Minichu on Dreams Contest

Sponsor: Mohan Chutani     October 25, 2023

Each night I lie sleeping I dream of wondrous places in a reverie Hopes leaping Floating on clouds Til daybreak washes over me No crowds Dream on Sunlight, I see Dawn Each night I lie sleeping Til daybreak washes over me Dawn

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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/24/2023 7:41:00 AM
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Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Keep on writing. Sara K
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John Lawless
Date: 10/26/2023 2:50:00 PM
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You made this form look easy....very nice job Lin
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/27/2023 4:49:00 AM
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Morning, John. It does take some thought and rearranging to make this form sound cohesive. Thank you for recognizing it can be a challenge.
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Jay Narain
Date: 10/26/2023 11:01:00 AM
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Sweet dreams lyrics. Loved it.
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/27/2023 4:47:00 AM
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Thanks for your thoughts, Jay.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 10/26/2023 10:03:00 AM
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Nothing beats a good night's sleep with pleasant dreams. Good luck in the contest Lin. Tom
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/27/2023 4:47:00 AM
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I can't remember when I've had a good night's sleep and good dreams. Thanks, Tom.
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/25/2023 3:30:00 PM
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aww sweet dreams Lin, wish I could sleep well but being away from home is challenging as you can imagine at the moment:-) hugs Jan xx
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/25/2023 3:38:00 PM
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I know, but just a couple more days and you'll be home. Courage, chick. Hugs.

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