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Let's Minichu on Dreams Contest

Sponsor: Mohan Chutani October 25, 2023

Each night I lie sleeping I dream of wondrous places in a reverie Hopes leaping Floating on clouds Til daybreak washes over me No crowds Dream on Sunlight, I see Dawn Each night I lie sleeping Til daybreak washes over me Dawn

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/24/2023 7:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Keep on writing. Sara K

John Lawless

Date: 10/26/2023 2:50:00 PM

You made this form look easy....very nice job Lin

Lin Lane
Date: 10/27/2023 4:49:00 AM

Morning, John. It does take some thought and rearranging to make this form sound cohesive. Thank you for recognizing it can be a challenge.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/26/2023 2:21:00 PM

a delicate and soft Rhyme poem, Lin. I like the visual construction and the rhyme scheme. I like it..nicely done, Sara

Lin Lane
Date: 10/27/2023 4:48:00 AM

Good morning, Sara and thanks so much for your supportive comments.

Jay Narain

Date: 10/26/2023 11:01:00 AM

Sweet dreams lyrics. Loved it.

Lin Lane
Date: 10/27/2023 4:47:00 AM

Thanks for your thoughts, Jay.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/26/2023 10:03:00 AM

Nothing beats a good night's sleep with pleasant dreams. Good luck in the contest Lin. Tom

Lin Lane
Date: 10/27/2023 4:47:00 AM

I can't remember when I've had a good night's sleep and good dreams. Thanks, Tom.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/25/2023 3:30:00 PM

aww sweet dreams Lin, wish I could sleep well but being away from home is challenging as you can imagine at the moment:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 10/25/2023 3:38:00 PM

I know, but just a couple more days and you'll be home. Courage, chick. Hugs.