dream of lost love

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Written, February 15, 2024
Poetry/Verse/dream of lost love
Copyright Protected, ID 02-1623-632-15
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France

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In dreams, I float with hair filigree searching for him but he is sleeping, his dark eyes closed, yet, he pulls me to him bruising my lips, and whispering. I stroke his engraved name in stone, remembering, loving him still in death.

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/15/2024 4:34:00 PM

your words were so touching and poignant. The last two lines took my breath away; I felt all the pain and grief as I read them. Thanks for sharing; have a splendid evening, Sara

Constance La France
Date: 2/16/2024 11:13:00 AM

Sara, thank you for the compliment and compassion, hugs, Constance