Sigrid Ermine Poet Rhyme

Dream of Feudalism

Florid gold funds greed's frivolity

                Sedated mandate of sodden monotiny 

           Forever renewing fields ripen with magnitude 

               Fervent farmer forges quest of fortitude


                
                   26th July 2020 

                  Contest : Four Lines of Poetry

                  Sponsor: Constance La France

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Caren Krutsinger August 2, 2020 at 8:13 PM There is always that farmer! Congratulations on your win! Sigrid Ermine August 2, 2020 at 11:30 PM Don't tell anyone, these (slightly edited) words were discarded from an old poem.

Constance La France July 29, 2020 at 5:27 PM Sigrid, congratulations on your win in my 4 line contest _Constance Sigrid Ermine July 30, 2020 at 10:10 AM Thank you, Constance! I see many gems among the list. Hard to judge, - at least fast to read,!

Andrea Dietrich July 29, 2020 at 1:44 PM Nice alliteration. Congrats on the winner list. Sigrid Ermine July 29, 2020 at 3:08 PM Thank you, Andrea. There are some light bulbs in this list. Really brilliant stuff, tough to have judged.

Aditi Mishra July 28, 2020 at 1:35 PM Powerful thoughts with beautiful alliteration Sigrid. Congratulations on your win!

Anne-Lise Andresen July 28, 2020 at 2:48 AM - Four beautiful lines ... congratulations on your win, Sigrid :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)