Dream of Fears

i fell through the floor
until the light was no more
i see pictures of my secret past
my head hurts i dont want this to last
i try to run away
but the pictures seem to stay
my body begins to fade
i hear voices "look at the person you made"
in from of me stands a little boy
he is crying and bleeding while holding a toy
blood is on the ground
nno matter how hard i try i cant make a sound
the boy points to a coffin
my tears start dropin
the boy laughs as i run
he says "you cant avoid this you are done"
my shadow grabs me
as the little boy stabs me
bloods dripping from my chest
he whispers "look at this mess"
i scream out in pain
as he hits me with a cain
i shout and scream
"please be a dream"
i open my right eye
and i start to cry
because i am in my room
i wasnt gonna meet my doom

*this was a accual dream i had  and i found it so strange i felt i should write about 
it*

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 6/2/2011 5:51:00 PM
DREAM always inspires me to write poems but I can't find myself penning my dreams,.....unlike your...well-penned....well-said... great!!! want to read more from you...
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Date: 6/2/2011 5:51:00 PM
a great piece!!!! excellent !! ****jun-jun
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