Ako Henshaw Poet Limerick

Dream Lover

Like it or not it is the best place to be in the MORNING.

The mimosa; often where I did meet MOURINE.

Pretty thing, she caught me with her charm as she danced the "HOLA"

In a trance, her cold lips whispered in my ear "DARLING"

Gosh 'twas just a dream stolen by the vapid noise of the STARLING.

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Poet Destroyer A February 16, 2016 at 10:35 PM Hi Ako, thank you for supporting my comment. That was nice of you. I hope to see you post again... Or should I day. "Break Over." LOL.. Love LINDA

Poet Destroyer A February 7, 2016 at 1:11 PM AKO, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA Ako Henshaw February 8, 2016 at 9:29 AM Thanks alot Linda for... just being there! Just took some time off but its good to be finally back. Thanks again... lots of love... XOXO

Skat A November 15, 2015 at 11:00 PM Ako, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**

Temajung Michael Tanjang June 26, 2014 at 3:26 PM WOW COOL THERE MAN LIKE IT SO STRAIGHT AND PERFECT Ako Henshaw June 28, 2014 at 12:02 PM Thanks man!