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Dream Lover

Like it or not it is the best place to be in the MORNING. The mimosa; often where I did meet MOURINE. Pretty thing, she caught me with her charm as she danced the "HOLA" In a trance, her cold lips whispered in my ear "DARLING" Gosh 'twas just a dream stolen by the vapid noise of the STARLING.

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Date: 2/16/2016 10:35:00 PM
Hi Ako, thank you for supporting my comment. That was nice of you. I hope to see you post again... Or should I day. "Break Over." LOL.. Love LINDA
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Date: 2/7/2016 1:11:00 PM
AKO, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Ako Henshaw
Date: 2/8/2016 9:29:00 AM
Thanks alot Linda for... just being there! Just took some time off but its good to be finally back. Thanks again... lots of love... XOXO
Date: 11/15/2015 11:00:00 PM
Ako, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
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Date: 6/26/2014 3:26:00 PM
WOW COOL THERE MAN LIKE IT SO STRAIGHT AND PERFECT
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Ako Henshaw
Date: 6/28/2014 12:02:00 PM
Thanks man!

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