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Dream In Dreams

“Dream in Dreams" My mind awakes to taste the tongues of those words you release. Yeah its speaks to me! Am hungry for those pink lips merry and mellow I wish to soak in. Commanding and demanding those words dig in...undress your tongue of such tone oh twinkle toes, bathe me with lying lips that speaks me an undying truth. The night burns black My dreams lay still living a coward's dream. I lay with my eyes shut, opening legs I lust of. So smooth as white streets with lines aligned to digest this illness I splash in ink, the injuries, your skin, I walk my pen on pure brown dermis. I want to rise with me in you, writing heads to come. A separate head is coming, I am cunning but take this white and erase sadness, pain and lies written on your inside. I want to wine drinking wine, lip singing on your breast with noise. Necks should be broken swords, flashing lips to melt in fusion forcing me in you! You in me! Push harder and harder We shall become one. I beg you unlock my needs, please me please! The world is a war outside, hide me in bosoms that heats my love a global warming. Set legs a waiting bed I wrap this broken pen in. I stay away to not fade away for every look I look at you these lips see and these eyes speak! Yes I become dysfunctional for I dream dreams of having you. Why won't you admit? I see the same in you. I see potential behind fear serving a sentence beneath that skin. I see you sitting waiting on he who is sitting. I see you trying for trials I have tried. Just north at the back of your head lays a mind so cohesive to mines. We both dream in dreams. Wake up, this is life. Feel this heart beating Hear these lips speaking Watch this fear fading. Let me lead this dream. By:Ramone J. Young Poetic System Kidz Entertainment (Stories of Angie)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/14/2016 6:09:00 PM
Very powerful speech, different and demanding attention, this is very well done in it's rawness and awareness.
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Ramone Young
Date: 5/14/2016 7:35:00 PM
Thank you alot...i have other writings that will call tear drops down your very eyes.
Date: 5/14/2016 12:56:00 PM
Ramone, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/14/2016 6:11:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Ramone. :)
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Date: 5/13/2016 6:15:00 PM
PS... Ramone,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/13/2016 4:42:00 PM
Ramone, xool first post....Linda
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