Jessica Arteaga Poet Triolet

Dream In Dream Out (Inception)

Dream within a dream; don't stay long
Real life slows, but mind keeps aging
The feel of falling, wakes you strong
Dream within a dream, don't stay long
Consciousness knows, there's something wrong
Memories break...song is staging 
Dream within a dream; don't stay long!
Real life slows...but mind keeps aging...

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Carol Sunshine Brown August 6, 2010 at 11:50 AM Congratulations Jessica on your win in Andrea Dietrich's contest "Movie Scene Triolet". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich August 5, 2010 at 3:28 PM Jessica. I love how you did your triolet. On the other hand, I was not so happy about the movie. haha. I think most america loves it, but not me. Anyway. a big congratulations to you. LUv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 5, 2010 at 8:12 AM Congrats Jessica on your wonderful win in Andrea's contest with this great piece.. enjoy another victory dance my friend..meet u at winners circle ..terrific..with luv..

Shirley Bracken July 29, 2010 at 3:51 PM Great job, Jessica. I can understand, especially 'real life slows...but mind keeps aging.' Great imagery, Shirley

Poet Destroyer A July 29, 2010 at 2:51 PM That is me Jessica,, dream in dram out,, cool poem. My dreams seem to change a lot,, Have a good one,..p.d.

John Loving Iii July 29, 2010 at 2:36 PM great movie. your right dream with in a dream dont stay long. john