Vrushani Thaker Poet Free verse

Dream Girl In True Life!!!!!!!

A girl I had seen
Beautiful as rose
Shining as sun
Glancing at me 
With eyes big brown
Into the dreams 
She came once
Days passed and
Married I was
With a girl beautiful
As in my dreams
Face was forgotten 
But beauty was eternal
And my wife was equal 
So I wonder if 
She was the same!


                                         by:-
                                         Vrushani Thaker

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Carol Sunshine Brown September 9, 2010 at 10:54 AM Congratulations Vrushani on your win in Tavarus Moreland's contest "Is She The One". Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 3, 2010 at 2:09 PM Congrats Vrushani on your HM in Tavarus's contest.. an amazing write.. wonderful win.. enjoy your special honor.. with luv today ..my friend..

Richard-Jamaal Keen July 20, 2010 at 10:43 PM great write! we all want that one girl man trust me, keep it up and thanks for the comments.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 20, 2010 at 9:13 AM Nice one to read ..starting off my day so fine.. with your poetry.. u should enter in IS SHE THE ONE contest posted.. u never know what the sponsor is looking for ..so check it out.. with luv..

Poet Destroyer A July 20, 2010 at 8:20 AM thank you for correcting me. I see that now.. i was going by the beauty of your poem,,and also the ending and the tittle,,,(((((But beauty was eternal And my wife was equal So I wonder if She was the same! ))))))).. that is the phrase that got my attention,..p.d.

Poet Destroyer A July 20, 2010 at 3:05 AM you know this poem is beautiful and the ending was like magic,, asking if your wife was your dream girl,,enjoyed it,..p..d

Matt T. Love July 19, 2010 at 9:34 PM I like this one. It makes me wonder how many times I got what i was yearning for, then got it and through it away. Nice write

David Byrne July 19, 2010 at 2:40 PM very lyrical!

Doris Culverhouse July 19, 2010 at 1:10 AM pretty poem, enjoyed reading today and thanks for your kind cmments on my works.

C.C Bloomsfield July 18, 2010 at 11:15 PM What a beauty. .gave me goose pimples..She must have been the same girl all along,lovely!Celene!