Dream Fragments - Lune

Life's highway is strewn, with fragments, of rainbow-hued dreams.
8/2/15 For Andrea's Pretty Little Lunes contest Visual #7 Kelly Lune
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Manassian Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 12:26 PM
OH!!! This is so lovely, Kim. :) So true....every line a beauty. Congrats on your great win. Hugs
Merryman Avatar
August 19, 2015 at 8:43 PM
Thank you, Eileen! You are so sweet!
A. Sharma Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 11:19 PM
What a wonderful imagery Kim, how true! Congrats on big win!
Merryman Avatar
August 19, 2015 at 8:42 PM
Thank you, Upma!
A   Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 8:52 PM
Hi Kim, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
Merryman Avatar
August 19, 2015 at 8:41 PM
Thank you, Linda! I appreciate it!
A  Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 1:32 AM
Kim, congratulations in Andrea's "Pretty Little Lunes contest" SKAT Love
Merryman Avatar
August 19, 2015 at 8:39 PM
Thank you, Skat! I appreciate it!
Mandani Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 9:38 AM
I like where you are going with this.
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August 19, 2015 at 8:38 PM
Thank you, Abdul!
Allison Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 7:37 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Kim:-) hugs Jan xx
Merryman Avatar
August 19, 2015 at 8:37 PM
Thanks, Jan!
Nance Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 7:22 AM
Oh this was a great take on the prompt picture, nicely done Kim ;)
Merryman Avatar
August 19, 2015 at 8:37 PM
Thank you, Casarah!
Callus Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 4:34 AM
A most beautiful take on this visual, Kim! Creative imagination:) ~ Congratulations on your lovely win! // paul
Merryman Avatar
August 19, 2015 at 8:36 PM
Thank you, Paul! I appreciate your kind comments!
Dietrich Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 1:22 AM
this is a really cool one and thinking outside the cereal box, Kim. Congrats in my contest.
Merryman Avatar
August 19, 2015 at 8:35 PM
Thank you for my placement, Andrea!
Babcock Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 10:41 AM
beautiful words on this verse Kim. love phyl
Merryman Avatar
August 11, 2015 at 8:34 PM
Thank you, Phyl!
Rotman Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 7:03 PM
I really like this. Guess I should give up and pull my entry now, lol. I sense a top 3 placing.
Merryman Avatar
August 11, 2015 at 8:32 PM
Thank you, Mary!
Muideen Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 5:53 PM
Wow!!! A short words that means a lot, it is well written KIM.... Love your subject..............A.M.
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August 11, 2015 at 8:31 PM
Thank you, Afolabi!
Allison Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 4:18 AM
lovely imagery Kim - I had no idea what this image was of ...had to ask - love your interpretation of the image - good luck:-) hugs Jan xx
Merryman Avatar
August 11, 2015 at 8:30 PM
Thank you, Jan!
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