Unseeking Seeker Poet Rhyme

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Dream forms spiral

Dream forms spiral, though we are still,
tranquil in witness mode,
so in time ego sheds its will
and sings to God an ode.

Sans our thoughts, who are we,
save the Self, which we see,
luminous are carefree?

Thoughts go viral ~
Dream forms spiral 

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I Am Anaya April 19, 2026 at 1:12 PM I have yet to unfurl a Quietus, it must be Latin..oh I see..quiet us now that's an epiphany instant Karma? Why not. I'll just admire yours, US~ April's blessings Unseeking Seeker April 19, 2026 at 9:05 PM Thank you, Anaya dear. Quietus is a simple form actually. First write the ending couplet and then use the last line, also poem title and first words of first line to proceed.

Unseeking Seeker April 18, 2026 at 9:18 PM Poetry form ~ Quietus