Dream Dismantled

Dream dismantled 

I fell in love with an
Petite, fawn brown angel
Somehow I Didn't know it

In return she yearned
compassion, understanding patents and dedication
 
But I was unable to show it

Despite my jaded ideologies
my unwillingness To believe
My angel never selfish
Always sharing her halo with me  

Obtuse and naive  
Within a certain degree

Unaware and mislead
My mental baggage 
Made it impossible to conceive.
My pursuit of happiness 
Was finally achieved

Truly a blessing in disguise 
in the form of a friend
Reduced to a Dream dismantled  
Never to be seen or heard from again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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October 24, 2011 at 8:50 AM
w.o.w. that was really good. o.o
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October 24, 2011 at 5:13 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Hernan. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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