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Written 26 December 2025

Place first in Dream Destination Poetry Contest sponsored by Sotto Poet

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Dream Destination


                                              I have flown to many climes of the world,
                                             Their beauty before my eyes has unfurled,
                                                 But one destination dear in my dream
                                         Outshines the rest like clear morning sunbeams.

                                              It`s a land where the serpentine shoreline,
                                           Cream-hued, stretching as far as the eye line,
                                                   Is greeted by whitish sandy beaches,
                                             Where under verdant palm trees I can feast.

                                                 On its beach, I can bask in the warm sun,
                                              Mark my footprint on the white sand for fun,
                                                      Engage in windsurfing, parasailing,
                                                     Practise snorkelling or scuba diving.
 
                                                   When tired after a swim, I can lie free
                                                        On shore in shade of a filao tree,
                                           Lulled by rustling of the breeze on green leaves
                                         And sweet music of waves, in dreams conceived.

                                              That dream place is an island, from heaven
                                                   Dropped in mid of the Indian Ocean,
                                             Named Mauritius, land of sun, sand and sea,
                                                   For destined visitors who wish to see.
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Jones Avatar
January 5, 2026 at 3:14 PM
Congratulations on your win!
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 30, 2025 at 4:13 PM
Hello Guptar, As I read your poem I felt like I was there. It is winter here cold and lots of snow. Your poem made me feel the sunshine and the sound of the waves. on the beach. Blessings my friend. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 1, 2026 at 5:48 AM
Hello Guptar, Thank you Guptar. Wishoing hyou the same fopr the new year. blessings my friend. /Darlene/
Guptar Avatar
December 31, 2025 at 11:22 AM
Thank you Darlene for appreciating the above poem and for your kind wishes. Wish you a happy new year filled with hopes and success and shining with good health, peace and prosperity.
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