Dream Date Scenario

My dream date would be calm and upbeat.
There will be no expensive dinner or outlay.
A pizza and movie night seems aped replete.
I merely desire to walk down the pathway.

We laugh, share jokes, and exchange gaze.
This chasm is obvious once it is in your heart.
Lift her find happiness and real love days.
Gather for a picnic along the waterway mart.

While the jamboree draws to a close.
We decide to spend the evening at a club.
Play music and share warm-scented rose.
Moonlit kisses, no matter how long you rub

No one plans or sets up the dream day.
Being at the right place at the right time.
My ideal date is a chase, not just a play.
The quest for empathy and love is sublime.

Written: January 23, 2023

My Dream Date Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Anoucheka Gangabissoon

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Vijay Pandit

February 22, 2023 at 8:38 AM

Back with BIG congrats on your podium win, Lasaad.

Valsa George

February 21, 2023 at 10:25 PM

No ostentations, but being together in love and closeness, occasionally going for a walk or going to a club or play music. Such simple acts done with love are so fulfilling. Congratulations on your win dear friend.

Paula Goldsmith

February 21, 2023 at 12:07 PM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your wonderful write/picture. Sounds like a wonderful date to me. Have a blessed day.........................

Kim Rodrigues

January 24, 2023 at 12:20 PM

As Vijay, likewise noticed, the peach colored roses draw attention. They convey warmth towards the receiver. Calm and upbeat - great attributes. Your a simple man who appreciates a movie night with pizza, not phony and fancy. We laugh, share jokes, convey gazes - a desire for closeness, shared humor and a pathway to something bigger. Enjoyed!

Vijay Pandit

January 24, 2023 at 6:22 AM

Your photo of roses conveys a romantic message. I like the environment you paint for two people in love.

Victor Buhagiar

January 24, 2023 at 2:32 AM

Hope your dream comes true.

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 24, 2023 at 2:29 AM

- A dream date must be pleasant and relaxed, romantic, good dialogue, smiles and laughter - a pleasant experience ... a lovely poem, Las :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Bj Legros Kelley

January 23, 2023 at 8:30 PM

You can't beat a picnic; I have loved those with my husband the best. This poem is sweet and romantic, I'm sure it will place well in a contest. I hope you are well today Sotto, thank you for my placement in your contest, it really made my day :)