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Dream Date Collaboration

Dinner and dancing, perfect first date Conversation flowing easily, it's going great Breeze blowing her long auburn hair Down towards the sea we disappear Midnight stroll on the starlit beach The perfect girl finally within reach Moonlight illuminates her pretty face Elegance, beauty, full of grace Slowly, tenderly, our hands entwine Hearts race she’s so divine Can’t believe she is mine My knees going weak From her exotic mystique My lips do shiver A kiss she delivers Hand in hand Across the sand Dreaming of wonderland Two hearts Love starts Forever 10~19~14 Contest :I do not know Sponsor:- Andrea Dietrich Collaboration Jan Allison & Tim Smith ~awarded 4th place~

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 10/26/2014 2:23:00 AM

This was a wonderful collaboration between you and Tim. The smooth flowing words and the rhyme made this so delightful.... The perfect romantic poem! Well done to you both!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/26/2014 2:51:00 AM

Many thanks Kelly Hugs Jan xxx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/25/2014 2:54:00 PM

Jan, did you just now put that info underneath, how it was a collab between you and Tim? gosh, you won high twice with me in this contest!! Second time by helping create this one with Tim!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/25/2014 3:01:00 PM

We couldn't put our names on the poem Andrea as it was for your contest and didn't want to let on who had collaborated with Tim - that was actually great fun as no one suspected it was me and Tim posted the poem and naturally gets the kudos of the win:-) I was struggling to write my own poem but I got there in the end:-) hugs jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/25/2014 1:21:00 PM

Great write and Congratulations but I swear this really feels like a deja vu!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/25/2014 1:26:00 PM

lol I think I've seen it here before but I can't remember where! Thanks for dropping by Maurice hugs Jan xx

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/25/2014 8:04:00 AM

Ow so you were his mystery drean date : ).I read this beauty on Tim s awhile ago : )..hmmmm.Loveeely ..Going to my favs.Soo Romantic »B-)

Jan Allison
Date: 10/25/2014 10:23:00 AM

Thank you so much Charmaine - we had to keep it a secret for the contest I am so glad I can finally post it now:-) Hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith
Date: 10/25/2014 8:57:00 AM

Hija De La Luna

Date: 10/25/2014 7:14:00 AM

simply wonderful and romantic, Jan & Tim!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/25/2014 7:17:00 AM

Thanks so much Hiji I have only just been able to post it as it was for a contest with no names and I couldn't risk it being seen if we both posted it:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/25/2014 5:58:00 AM

This is a wonderful collaboration! You two work very well together, you should do more poems together! What a terrific write you have written! I surely enjoyed reading this delightful piece here this morning! You have amazed me with this talented poem! Great Work!!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/25/2014 6:07:00 AM

Many thanks Russell. Tim posted the poem on his page as it was for a contest and no names were to be given so it is only now the contest has closed can I reveal I was the mystery collaborator:-) hugs Jan xxx

Jan Allison

Date: 10/25/2014 2:07:00 AM

It was an honour to work with you again Tim - we wrote it and no one suspected lol:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 10/25/2014 3:34:00 AM

:-) Feeling is mutual my friend:-) hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith
Date: 10/25/2014 3:09:00 AM

Thanks Jan..you are a great friend and terrific poetess....hugs Tim