Jan Allison Poet Rhyme

Dream Date Collaboration

Dinner and dancing, perfect first date
Conversation flowing easily, it's going great
Breeze blowing her long auburn hair
Down towards the sea we disappear
Midnight stroll on the starlit beach 
The perfect girl finally within reach

Moonlight illuminates her pretty face
Elegance, beauty, full of grace 
Slowly, tenderly, our hands entwine
Hearts race she’s so divine
Can’t believe she is mine

My knees going weak
From her exotic mystique
My lips do shiver 
A kiss she delivers

Hand in hand 
Across the sand
Dreaming of wonderland

Two hearts
Love starts 

Forever 


10~19~14
Contest :I do not know Sponsor:- Andrea Dietrich

Collaboration Jan Allison & Tim Smith
~awarded 4th place~

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Kelly Deschler October 26, 2014 at 2:23 AM This was a wonderful collaboration between you and Tim. The smooth flowing words and the rhyme made this so delightful.... The perfect romantic poem! Well done to you both! Jan Allison October 26, 2014 at 2:51 AM Many thanks Kelly Hugs Jan xxx

Andrea Dietrich October 25, 2014 at 2:54 PM Jan, did you just now put that info underneath, how it was a collab between you and Tim? gosh, you won high twice with me in this contest!! Second time by helping create this one with Tim!!! Jan Allison October 25, 2014 at 3:01 PM We couldn't put our names on the poem Andrea as it was for your contest and didn't want to let on who had collaborated with Tim - that was actually great fun as no one suspected it was me and Tim posted the poem and naturally gets the kudos of the win:-) I was struggling to write my own poem but I got there in the end:-) hugs jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne October 25, 2014 at 1:21 PM Great write and Congratulations but I swear this really feels like a deja vu! Jan Allison October 25, 2014 at 1:26 PM lol I think I've seen it here before but I can't remember where! Thanks for dropping by Maurice hugs Jan xx

Charmaine Chircop October 25, 2014 at 8:04 AM Ow so you were his mystery drean date : ).I read this beauty on Tim s awhile ago : )..hmmmm.Loveeely ..Going to my favs.Soo Romantic »B-) Jan Allison October 25, 2014 at 10:23 AM Thank you so much Charmaine - we had to keep it a secret for the contest I am so glad I can finally post it now:-) Hugs Jan xx Tim Smith October 25, 2014 at 8:57 AM :)

Hija De La Luna October 25, 2014 at 7:14 AM simply wonderful and romantic, Jan & Tim! Jan Allison October 25, 2014 at 7:17 AM Thanks so much Hiji I have only just been able to post it as it was for a contest with no names and I couldn't risk it being seen if we both posted it:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Russell Sivey October 25, 2014 at 5:58 AM This is a wonderful collaboration! You two work very well together, you should do more poems together! What a terrific write you have written! I surely enjoyed reading this delightful piece here this morning! You have amazed me with this talented poem! Great Work!! Jan Allison October 25, 2014 at 6:07 AM Many thanks Russell. Tim posted the poem on his page as it was for a contest and no names were to be given so it is only now the contest has closed can I reveal I was the mystery collaborator:-) hugs Jan xxx

Jan Allison October 25, 2014 at 2:07 AM It was an honour to work with you again Tim - we wrote it and no one suspected lol:-) Hugs Jan xxx Jan Allison October 25, 2014 at 3:34 AM :-) Feeling is mutual my friend:-) hugs Jan xxx Tim Smith October 25, 2014 at 3:09 AM Thanks Jan..you are a great friend and terrific poetess....hugs Tim