Shane Thacker Poet Other

Dream Catcher

Rest awhile, 
the day is at its end and you feel broken,
and as tomorrow too seems hopeless,
I will open up my arms to hold you,
so close your eyes,
pillow me,
I'll be your dreamless slumber,

I'll revise your revile,
spill your secrets to the moonlight,
kiss goodnight the tears worth while, 
and carry you through dawn,
but if you tomorrow too should crumble,
do so within my arms,
so you don't lose a piece of who you are,
then close your eyes, 
pillow me,
I'll be your dreamless slumber

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Oliver Chu December 30, 2024 at 5:14 PM This is such a beautiful poem, word choice is incredibly well thought out!! Hugs. Shane Thacker December 30, 2024 at 6:05 PM Thank you so much, Oliver. Welcome to Soup!

Speaks Volumes December 17, 2024 at 8:04 AM Thanks Shane, you have built a wonderful library of amazing poetry, and I relish each time I return to each poem, to enjoy it again. Shane Thacker December 18, 2024 at 4:52 PM Thank you, Wen. I still don't have enough. I wish I had so many more, but I'm getting there, albeit slowly.

Daisy Meadows November 4, 2023 at 1:31 AM A good poem. Well done. Shane Thacker November 4, 2023 at 8:12 AM Thank you, Jeanette. I appreciate you taking time to read it and leave a comment.

Speaks Volumes June 19, 2023 at 9:39 AM Such a romantic poem. "but if you tomorrow too should crumble, do so within my arms, so you don't lose a piece of who you are" The sentiment in these words are unrivalled caring for someone so precious to you. This is a beautiful poem. Shane Thacker June 19, 2023 at 11:57 AM Thank you, SV. This means a lot coming from such an amazing writer like yourself.