Dream Catastrophically

Elated emotion of catastrophe,
    and gambling while a dream.
A mountain of interpretation,
   from which an eye shall gleam.
Forever will the urges exist,
   to pave along the way.
A lighted tunnel understood,
   will appear without delay.
Just as swiftly a moment slows,
   a road of tenacity.
A fruitful long adventure,
   no longer theirs to see.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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April 30, 2015 at 9:21 PM
Hi Jami, Congrats.................... Luv ~Linda~
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April 30, 2015 at 9:05 PM
JAMI :) Congratulations in MY keeping it real contest. ~SKAT~
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April 30, 2015 at 9:30 PM
I'm glad you liked my poem, sorry, this confuses me though, did I win the contest? Or are you just congratulating me for entering? I'm very new to this site and not sure how it all works yet! :/
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September 14, 2014 at 7:54 PM
Hi Jami, what a deep powerful write this is! Bravo! A warm welcome to PoetrySoup and happy writings! Pandita
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September 14, 2014 at 8:27 AM
Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Jami - I choose your first great written poem - You write skillfully - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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September 11, 2014 at 9:34 PM
Jami,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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