Dream

Another night I'm awaken by her sight, 
See her smile, hear her soft subtle sound. 
My time of peace is replaced by lies 
That cause the water that drowns  

What was just a peaceful face. 
I feel the hole in my heart 
And the horrible grasp of this fate. 
As a fish out of water, falling apart,   

Gasping for that presence to my avail. 
How the heart bleeds for its repair 
To restore this ship and sail. 
With tragedy pumping through these oars, 
depression deep on deck with remorse.   

Lays this once fierce battleship 
On the shores of my bedroom, 
A soon apparition in the mist 
As my siren that caused all this
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 5/6/2014 7:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Miggy
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Miggy Lomeli
Date: 5/6/2014 11:08:00 AM
Thank you Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 4/29/2014 2:30:00 PM
Miggy,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Miggy Lomeli
Date: 4/29/2014 5:48:00 PM
Hi skat! And thank yoy for your welcoming message and I would love to share about my self sometime to my new soup friend!
Date: 4/25/2014 11:33:00 AM
Hi Miggy, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following and reading your poems. ~Take Care!! From: you're new poet friend ~ LINDA ~
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Date: 4/25/2014 12:04:00 PM
Miggy, I guarantee, you will like this place.. :)
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Miggy Lomeli
Date: 4/25/2014 11:53:00 AM
Thank you Linda, I'm happy to have found this place, fora while ivI've been searching for a place like this and now am excited to join.I will continue to write and show some of my past as well :)
Date: 4/25/2014 6:03:00 AM
My time of peace replaced by lies....fine!
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Muhammad Safa Thajudeen
Date: 4/25/2014 8:15:00 PM
Sorry!
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Miggy Lomeli
Date: 4/25/2014 11:52:00 AM
Sorry accidently posted to wrong person sorry again muhammad
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Miggy Lomeli
Date: 4/25/2014 11:51:00 AM
Thank you Linda, I'm happy to have found this place, fora while ivI've been searching for a place like this and now am excited to join.I will continue to write and show some of my past as well :)
Date: 4/25/2014 5:50:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Miggy:) - I choose your first very well written sonnet dream poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/25/2014 11:54:00 AM
Thank you for the warm welcome Anne and i will do all that i can to keep writing and the peace among our soup family!
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