Dream

By woods, really deep...
for sprite--wood sprite, I peep!
willows, thorns… hands scratched,
pixie with willow, I yearned!
all through, jars, cans, big, small,
fairy to see, every lid:I pull to fall,
tears down, I hit something aaaah! an elf,
signs to follow, fear engulfs,
deep I walk, wow !my Audi version glide,
jumped on to the seat, elf-- by side
wow! lightning pace, clouds! I kiss clouds!
hugged elf, “love you”screamed I aloud,
“you crazy goose!” screamed my mom,
Jesus! was it a dream?



(Dream as said by my son)

23-06-2013////// for the contest "fantasy"

edited on 20-08-2013.
Submitted for the contest "Any poem,Any subject" by "Anne Currin"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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November 2, 2013 at 11:39 PM
Jenish, .:-) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the HOME PAGE.... always~ LINDA
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August 13, 2013 at 2:43 PM
just stopping by here to thank you for seeing my poems recently. Did I ever ask you where you are from?
Nair Avatar
July 5, 2013 at 7:51 PM
Wonderful dream, friend, and it is a cute write, thnx for your visit!!
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June 27, 2013 at 7:03 PM
It's a pleasure to have read this delightful poem. Nicely done. Best wishes in the contest. Warm Smiles Connie.
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June 26, 2013 at 10:06 PM
Hello Jenish, kids can dream all sorts of dreams... sometimes i wonder what fantasy land they live it... love the ending jumping feeling and thought... :-).... xox~ LINDA
Johnson Avatar
June 26, 2013 at 9:32 AM
What an amazing dream. Thank you for reading and commenting on mine. Love, Joyce
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June 26, 2013 at 8:20 AM
I like your entry a lot, very well done thanks for sharing your sons dream.
Dietrich Avatar
June 24, 2013 at 11:53 PM
so did your son say this to you? I like the insertion of the little elf into the scene and it did have a dream quality to it for sure!!
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