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Perfect lips pouting Red pink as if lightly touched by strawberries Eyes compelling drawing in the masses Brown the color of honey, warm and inviting Hair flowing wind blown Brown black, lightly highlighted perfectly shiny smelling like heaven You are the perfect dream woman Two races, three races, maybe more Mix Chick.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/7/2013 12:45:00 PM
Perfectly expressed and beautiful... I like each line. Great Job~A.O
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Date: 4/24/2013 5:18:00 PM
I like the figurative language used in this piece.Very beautiful
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Date: 4/12/2013 12:16:00 AM
Beautifully and sensually descriptive. Love it. - Red
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Date: 3/30/2013 7:21:00 AM
Excellent write. Love your writings. Tfs
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Date: 3/27/2013 10:32:00 PM
I find this poem very alluring. I like how you pulled it all together with the last two words.
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Date: 3/26/2013 10:19:00 AM
wonderful write,Mix Chick lol
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Date: 3/26/2013 5:51:00 PM
Hey Richard, Good to see you.
Date: 3/26/2013 5:45:00 AM
Love the imagery here...a huge fan!!!
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Date: 3/26/2013 7:02:00 AM
Thank you Pace
Date: 3/25/2013 8:39:00 PM
This poem tastes sweet. It's delicious to read. ~Jeremy
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Date: 3/26/2013 7:02:00 AM
Well that's sounds good so thank you.
Date: 3/25/2013 9:50:00 AM
Wonderful descriptive imagery. I often wonder about my heritage. Whatever it is, it can't come close to your Mix Chick. Jack
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Date: 3/25/2013 1:02:00 PM
For me nothing compares :).
Date: 3/25/2013 8:53:00 AM
DELICIOUS!!! Love those mix chicks... they are a smouldering obsession of mine! LOL Yummy hugs and love... Jackers! xox
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Date: 3/25/2013 1:01:00 PM
Hi Jack my friend good to hear from you. Thanks for the kind words.

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