Ale A A Poet Free verse

Dream

Perfect lips pouting
Red pink as if lightly touched by strawberries 
Eyes compelling drawing in the masses
Brown the color of honey, warm and inviting
Hair flowing wind blown
Brown black, lightly highlighted perfectly shiny smelling like heaven
You are the perfect dream woman
Two races, three races, maybe more
Mix Chick.

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Abdulhafeez Oyewole May 7, 2013 at 12:45 PM Perfectly expressed and beautiful... I like each line. Great Job~A.O

Christine Phillips April 24, 2013 at 5:18 PM I like the figurative language used in this piece.Very beautiful

Red Omara April 12, 2013 at 12:16 AM Beautifully and sensually descriptive. Love it. - Red

Ravi Sathasivam March 30, 2013 at 7:21 AM Excellent write. Love your writings. Tfs

Richard Lamoureux March 27, 2013 at 10:32 PM I find this poem very alluring. I like how you pulled it all together with the last two words.

Richard Palmer March 26, 2013 at 10:19 AM wonderful write,Mix Chick lol Ale A A March 26, 2013 at 5:51 PM Hey Richard, Good to see you.

Pace Ink-U-Script March 26, 2013 at 5:45 AM Love the imagery here...a huge fan!!! Ale A A March 26, 2013 at 7:02 AM Thank you Pace

Jeremy Martin March 25, 2013 at 8:39 PM This poem tastes sweet. It's delicious to read. ~Jeremy Ale A A March 26, 2013 at 7:02 AM Well that's sounds good so thank you.

Jack Jordan March 25, 2013 at 9:50 AM Wonderful descriptive imagery. I often wonder about my heritage. Whatever it is, it can't come close to your Mix Chick. Jack Ale A A March 25, 2013 at 1:02 PM For me nothing compares :).

Jack Ellison March 25, 2013 at 8:53 AM DELICIOUS!!! Love those mix chicks... they are a smouldering obsession of mine! LOL Yummy hugs and love... Jackers! xox Ale A A March 25, 2013 at 1:01 PM Hi Jack my friend good to hear from you. Thanks for the kind words.