Dream

Dream



                On your lips,
                after you fall a sleep, 
                two short poems,
                I'll write for you,
                on your lips,
                On your lips
                in front of your eyes,
                after falling a sleep,
                picture will burned,
                of one you love ,
                on your lips,
                in front of you're eyes,

                                   No one is aloud to wake you up,
                                   not  this very night,
                                   while you're dreaming  your loved one
                                   no one,
                                   no one, is aloud to dream about you,
                                   not this very night,
                                   no one,
                                   no one, is aloud to have desire about you
                                   not this very night
                                   no one,
                                   don't even try.

                In your dreams,
                after you fall a sleep,
                river will flow from far a way,
                in your dreams,
                in those nights that are just yours,
                after you fall a sleep
                you're gonna feel the  pain,
                in you're dreams,
                in you're dreams,

                                     No one is aloud to wake you up,
                                     not this very night,
                                     while you're dreaming your loved one
                                     no one,
                                     no one, is aloud to dream about you,
                                     not this very night,
                                     no one,
                                     no one, is aloud to have desire about you,
                                     not this very night,
                                     no one.
                                     don't even try it.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 3/12/2013 8:24:00 PM
Very deep Ivy very stong I enjoyed reading it
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Date: 6/25/2012 10:59:00 AM
great write Ivy,love the formation
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Ivy Vresk
Date: 6/26/2012 7:46:00 AM
thank you Richard for your comment,Ivy
Date: 6/18/2012 5:00:00 PM
I thought I left a msg here already? But I guess not? I came back to read your wonderful words. :o) Waiting for more!
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Ivy Vresk
Date: 6/19/2012 8:53:00 AM
Hi Dan, thank you coming back,and your comment,I am sorry I have been neglecting writing,but lately I was busy with life, I'll beck,thank you for your patient,love Ivy.
Date: 6/7/2012 10:58:00 AM
clever write, my friend - love the lay out too
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Ivy Vresk
Date: 6/19/2012 8:44:00 AM
thank you dear Jack for your comment,I appreciate it,Ivy
Date: 6/2/2012 9:08:00 AM
this does seem like a ballad. nice one. I suggest you word on your grammar though
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Ivy Vresk
Date: 6/4/2012 9:15:00 AM
Thank you dear Brittany for stopping by and honest comment,I appreciate that,Ivy
Date: 6/2/2012 8:10:00 AM
Wooow.....well written.....love it. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Ivy Vresk
Date: 6/4/2012 9:16:00 AM
Thank you dear Annie Lisa,Ivy
Date: 5/27/2012 11:41:00 AM
this is destined to be a song i believe, i took some time understanding the emotion but when i did , must say i loved it
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Ivy Vresk
Date: 6/4/2012 9:17:00 AM
Thanx I appreciate your comment,Ivy
Date: 5/21/2012 9:04:00 PM
This seemed very weird to me. But I sure enjoyed it!!!
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Ivy Vresk
Date: 6/4/2012 9:20:00 AM
Dreams are weird,but we need them,right,thank you dear friend for your comment,Ivy
Date: 5/21/2012 7:11:00 PM
Yikes..had me on the edge of my seat here!!!
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Ivy Vresk
Date: 5/21/2012 7:58:00 PM
Thank you Pace, Ivy
Date: 5/21/2012 6:00:00 PM
Amazing!
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Ivy Vresk
Date: 5/21/2012 6:13:00 PM
thank you Alex,Ivy
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