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Dream On your lips, after you fall a sleep, two short poems, I'll write for you, on your lips, On your lips in front of your eyes, after falling a sleep, picture will burned, of one you love , on your lips, in front of you're eyes, No one is aloud to wake you up, not this very night, while you're dreaming your loved one no one, no one, is aloud to dream about you, not this very night, no one, no one, is aloud to have desire about you not this very night no one, don't even try. In your dreams, after you fall a sleep, river will flow from far a way, in your dreams, in those nights that are just yours, after you fall a sleep you're gonna feel the pain, in you're dreams, in you're dreams, No one is aloud to wake you up, not this very night, while you're dreaming your loved one no one, no one, is aloud to dream about you, not this very night, no one, no one, is aloud to have desire about you, not this very night, no one. don't even try it.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/12/2013 8:24:00 PM
Very deep Ivy very stong I enjoyed reading it
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Date: 6/25/2012 10:59:00 AM
great write Ivy,love the formation
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Date: 6/26/2012 7:46:00 AM
thank you Richard for your comment,Ivy
Date: 6/18/2012 5:00:00 PM
I thought I left a msg here already? But I guess not? I came back to read your wonderful words. :o) Waiting for more!
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Date: 6/19/2012 8:53:00 AM
Hi Dan, thank you coming back,and your comment,I am sorry I have been neglecting writing,but lately I was busy with life, I'll beck,thank you for your patient,love Ivy.
Date: 6/7/2012 10:58:00 AM
clever write, my friend - love the lay out too
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Date: 6/19/2012 8:44:00 AM
thank you dear Jack for your comment,I appreciate it,Ivy
Date: 6/2/2012 9:08:00 AM
this does seem like a ballad. nice one. I suggest you word on your grammar though
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Date: 6/4/2012 9:15:00 AM
Thank you dear Brittany for stopping by and honest comment,I appreciate that,Ivy
Date: 6/2/2012 8:10:00 AM
Wooow.....well written.....love it. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 6/4/2012 9:16:00 AM
Thank you dear Annie Lisa,Ivy
Date: 5/27/2012 11:41:00 AM
this is destined to be a song i believe, i took some time understanding the emotion but when i did , must say i loved it
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Date: 6/4/2012 9:17:00 AM
Thanx I appreciate your comment,Ivy
Date: 5/21/2012 9:04:00 PM
This seemed very weird to me. But I sure enjoyed it!!!
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Date: 6/4/2012 9:20:00 AM
Dreams are weird,but we need them,right,thank you dear friend for your comment,Ivy
Date: 5/21/2012 7:11:00 PM
Yikes..had me on the edge of my seat here!!!
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Date: 5/21/2012 7:58:00 PM
Thank you Pace, Ivy
Date: 5/21/2012 6:00:00 PM
Amazing!
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Date: 5/21/2012 6:13:00 PM
thank you Alex,Ivy

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