Dream

Dream



                On your lips,
                after you fall a sleep, 
                two short poems,
                I'll write for you,
                on your lips,
                On your lips
                in front of your eyes,
                after falling a sleep,
                picture will burned,
                of one you love ,
                on your lips,
                in front of you're eyes,

                                   No one is aloud to wake you up,
                                   not  this very night,
                                   while you're dreaming  your loved one
                                   no one,
                                   no one, is aloud to dream about you,
                                   not this very night,
                                   no one,
                                   no one, is aloud to have desire about you
                                   not this very night
                                   no one,
                                   don't even try.

                In your dreams,
                after you fall a sleep,
                river will flow from far a way,
                in your dreams,
                in those nights that are just yours,
                after you fall a sleep
                you're gonna feel the  pain,
                in you're dreams,
                in you're dreams,

                                     No one is aloud to wake you up,
                                     not this very night,
                                     while you're dreaming your loved one
                                     no one,
                                     no one, is aloud to dream about you,
                                     not this very night,
                                     no one,
                                     no one, is aloud to have desire about you,
                                     not this very night,
                                     no one.
                                     don't even try it.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Ornelas Avatar
March 12, 2013 at 8:24 PM
Very deep Ivy very stong I enjoyed reading it
Palmer Avatar
June 25, 2012 at 10:59 AM
great write Ivy,love the formation
Vresk Avatar
June 26, 2012 at 7:46 AM
thank you Richard for your comment,Ivy
Kearley Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 5:00 PM
I thought I left a msg here already? But I guess not? I came back to read your wonderful words. :o) Waiting for more!
Vresk Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 8:53 AM
Hi Dan, thank you coming back,and your comment,I am sorry I have been neglecting writing,but lately I was busy with life, I'll beck,thank you for your patient,love Ivy.
Horne Avatar
June 7, 2012 at 10:58 AM
clever write, my friend - love the lay out too
Vresk Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 8:44 AM
thank you dear Jack for your comment,I appreciate it,Ivy
Britt Avatar
June 2, 2012 at 9:08 AM
this does seem like a ballad. nice one. I suggest you word on your grammar though
Vresk Avatar
June 4, 2012 at 9:15 AM
Thank you dear Brittany for stopping by and honest comment,I appreciate that,Ivy
Andresen Avatar
June 2, 2012 at 8:10 AM
Wooow.....well written.....love it. - oxox Anne-Lise
Vresk Avatar
June 4, 2012 at 9:16 AM
Thank you dear Annie Lisa,Ivy
Desai Avatar
May 27, 2012 at 11:41 AM
this is destined to be a song i believe, i took some time understanding the emotion but when i did , must say i loved it
Vresk Avatar
June 4, 2012 at 9:17 AM
Thanx I appreciate your comment,Ivy
Dietrich Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 9:04 PM
This seemed very weird to me. But I sure enjoyed it!!!
Vresk Avatar
June 4, 2012 at 9:20 AM
Dreams are weird,but we need them,right,thank you dear friend for your comment,Ivy
Ink-U-Script Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 7:11 PM
Yikes..had me on the edge of my seat here!!!
Vresk Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 7:58 PM
Thank you Pace, Ivy
Mckenna Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 6:00 PM
Amazing!
Vresk Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 6:13 PM
thank you Alex,Ivy
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