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Dream

I am frozen, yet awake
paralyzed at fear, grasping to move
unable to in my own skin, able to see all around
I move parallel faster, with my body below
terror holds me down, without breath
I hear chatter, not of my own
then I move, I breathe
I awaken out of the terrible 
Dream





Taryn Thompson

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Rachel St.Cross Date: 10/26/2012 5:39:00 PM * AHHH, TO BE SOOO BEAUTIFUL ONE CAN ONLY BELIEVE THIS, SWEET BEAUTIFUL TARYN. FRAGRANCE FOLLOWS YOUR SPLENDOURS AMID CRYSTAL WATERS AND DREAMS, BECKON THEIR LOVE UNTO YOUR BEAUTY, 'COME TO ME.' MY LOVE, RACHEL * Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 5/22/2012 7:54:00 AM I am stopping by your poetry to thank you for your kind comments on my writing. It has been a pleasure to read yours today Taryn. Love, Carol Login to Reply Taryn Thompson Date: 5/22/2012 11:56:00 AM THANK YOU I PRAY YOU HAVE a BLESSED DAY!!!

Broken Butterfly Date: 5/4/2012 6:31:00 PM I have been there too Taryn embraced in that nightmare, well done Login to Reply Taryn Thompson Date: 5/6/2012 7:18:00 AM THaNK YOU!!1 HAVE an awesome day

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 5/4/2012 3:30:00 PM Often we get dreams such as this that terrify us. Sometimes we can't move or even speak. Your description of this state of subconsciousness is awesome, Taryn. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply Taryn Thompson Date: 5/6/2012 7:19:00 AM THANK YOU HAVE AN AWESOME DAY!!

David Williams Date: 5/4/2012 2:31:00 PM Taryn well written, held me until the end, thanks for your comments..David Login to Reply

Chuck Novotny Date: 4/30/2012 1:54:00 AM Excellent description of night paralysis. I've encountered these same feelings in those moments not yet awake and not fully asleep, and you've captured them well. - Chuck Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/20/2012 1:51:00 PM Good that just was a dream Taryn. - Have a lovely weekend to you. - oxox Anne-Lise Login to Reply Taryn Thompson Date: 5/6/2012 7:19:00 AM THANK YOU HAVE AN AWESOME DAY!!!!!

Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 4/12/2012 5:29:00 PM Wow...I got inside your dream!! Good write!! Login to Reply