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one fine morning i woke up with a smile because in my dream i walked with you a mile i held your hand tight because i dint want u go to out of my sight on the leaves there was morning dew and the birds chirping were very few sunrays fell over your face never had i seen so beautiful place everything that i felt was very new suddenly i woke up and all the butterflies flew :)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/8/2012 6:23:00 AM
Interesting poem. I am a little thrown off with the spelling (coz) instead of because and (u) instead of you. Other than that you have a nice poem here. Jancarl
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Freny Gilbert
Date: 1/8/2012 6:40:00 AM
:) i'v change coz to because & u to you
Date: 1/8/2012 6:08:00 AM
I smile to, Freny.....like it. oxox love from Anne-Lise :)
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