Dream

one fine morning i woke up with a smile
because in my dream i walked with you a mile


i held your hand tight
because  i dint want u go to out of my sight


on the leaves there was morning dew
and the birds chirping were very few

sunrays fell over your face
never had i seen so beautiful place

everything that i felt was very new
suddenly i woke up and all the butterflies flew :)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Campi Avatar
January 8, 2012 at 6:23 AM
Interesting poem. I am a little thrown off with the spelling (coz) instead of because and (u) instead of you. Other than that you have a nice poem here. Jancarl
Gilbert Avatar
January 8, 2012 at 6:40 AM
:) i'v change coz to because & u to you
Andresen Avatar
January 8, 2012 at 6:08 AM
I smile to, Freny.....like it. oxox love from Anne-Lise :)
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