Dream

a dream lost at noon
could be like a misty morn
finer visions visit soon!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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October 23, 2009 at 11:42 AM
Good use of imagery. The rhyme works to tie the first and last lines together. Thank you for your kind comment. Keep on writing! Have a wonderful weekend! Karen
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October 17, 2009 at 7:59 AM
Hi Canny: thankxxx for your comment on my Captive poem... it was written long ago but has so much meaning today for me... your poem Dream says much is a few words.. one should never give up on their dreams... I enjoyed your message....
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October 17, 2009 at 7:56 AM
You paint a very vivid picture with this though evoking Haiku, dear Canny. Lainie
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October 16, 2009 at 3:51 PM
Interesting possibilities here. Keep writing. Sara
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