Dream

a dream lost at noon could be like a misty morn finer visions visit soon!

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Date: 10/23/2009 11:42:00 AM

Good use of imagery. The rhyme works to tie the first and last lines together. Thank you for your kind comment. Keep on writing! Have a wonderful weekend! Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/17/2009 7:59:00 AM

Hi Canny: thankxxx for your comment on my Captive poem... it was written long ago but has so much meaning today for me... your poem Dream says much is a few words.. one should never give up on their dreams... I enjoyed your message....

Elaine George

Date: 10/17/2009 7:56:00 AM

You paint a very vivid picture with this though evoking Haiku, dear Canny. Lainie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/16/2009 3:51:00 PM

Interesting possibilities here. Keep writing. Sara