Dream

        Dream follows ambition in fervent fervor.
          Runs in rapture drinking dormant desire.
          Endless dream to flow like restless river.
          Aglow dream glazes for whole life entire.
          Meet your dream to fulfil till you expire.

appreciationquintain (english)

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Linda Alice Fowler

October 9, 2023 at 8:31 AM

Dreamy write Anisha. Very nice! Congratulations! :)

Andrea Dietrich

October 8, 2023 at 11:57 AM

I liked this one and it's river-like flow. Congrats in my contest, Anisha.

Ink Empress

September 25, 2023 at 12:06 AM

Beautiful take on this prompt. I am loving your rhymes and how this flows and the way you’ve crafted this acrostic. I especially love “ runs in rapture drinking dormant desire” seamless alliterations! So creative:” aglow dream glazes for the whole life entire” whoa! Love that! Brilliant write this is. Im sure a winner. Goodluck

Hiya Sharma

September 24, 2023 at 10:13 PM

Wow, this is such a beautiful take for the contest and I love your selection of the theme 'dream'.. "Endless dream to flow like restless river" Very true and so brilliantly expressed with such an intriguing flow! "Aglow dream glazes for whole life entire" Keep pursuing and weaving dreams until the last, for its the source of keeping the flame burning!

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