Dream

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Written: September 22, 2023 Try a Quincrosticain! Contest Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich _____________________________________________________________ Deep slumber is a weird and boundless realm seen Redolent of searing fire, on desire wings, blaze Ephemeral set as utopias wander and souls serene. Ambrosian dream smell fills the air as echoes daze, Mixed guests fit in, with a story and a hazy maze.

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/9/2023 7:59:00 AM

I love this Las - congratulations! :)

Christuraj Alex

Date: 10/9/2023 2:27:00 AM

"Ambrosian dream smell fills the air as echoes daze" - Beautiful writing. Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/8/2023 11:32:00 AM

i love that part about mixed guests fitting into dreams. SO true. Congrats in my contest.

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 9/22/2023 4:26:00 PM

Hello Sotto Poet, very nice photo & interesting acrostic poem! Some dreams are clear (that's a dream) some are hazy maze. Best regards and wishes, have a nice day ~AA

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/22/2023 4:24:00 PM

Line 2 is my favorite line!