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Dream

Written: September 22, 2023 Try a Quincrosticain! Contest Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich _____________________________________________________________ Deep slumber is a weird and boundless realm seen Redolent of searing fire, on desire wings, blaze Ephemeral set as utopias wander and souls serene. Ambrosian dream smell fills the air as echoes daze, Mixed guests fit in, with a story and a hazy maze.
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Fowler Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 7:59 AM
I love this Las - congratulations! :)
Alex Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 2:27 AM
"Ambrosian dream smell fills the air as echoes daze" - Beautiful writing. Congratulations!
Dietrich Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 11:32 AM
i love that part about mixed guests fitting into dreams. SO true. Congrats in my contest.
Alhemaidy Avatar
September 22, 2023 at 4:26 PM
Hello Sotto Poet, very nice photo & interesting acrostic poem! Some dreams are clear (that's a dream) some are hazy maze. Best regards and wishes, have a nice day ~AA
Rodrigues Avatar
September 22, 2023 at 4:24 PM
Line 2 is my favorite line!
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