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Dream

I've been wishing for a dream That has never come true And in this dream I see a reflection of you With the texture of your face And your laid back style Keeps a little special place With such warmth for a while You looked into my eyes In hopes of this forever Remembering all of the times That we shared together You slowly disappeared Into the light shining through And you simply whispered the words, "I Love You!"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/17/2009 11:14:00 AM
I like the way this poem ends. The flow is wonderful and enchanting. Great job and welcome to poetry soup! ~Joseph
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Date: 5/12/2009 5:20:00 PM
I love your style. Great poem. -Alley
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Date: 5/12/2009 7:49:00 AM
SWEET POEM FULL OF TRUE LOVE
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Date: 5/12/2009 7:34:00 AM
Nice love poem.
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