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Dream

Her arms outstretched and waiting to see her love once more She stands within the sands of time as sea gulls rest upon the shore Her eyes close in concentration as she begins to take her flight On wings only seen to her she flies throughout the night He knows she will return as she's always done before So he picks a rose of crystal to show his love once more She sees him in the distance and her heart picks up beat He's the world she had hoped for even though in dreams they meet This life they share together to him, is sweet as morning dew One day this dream they share will possibly come true

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 2/22/2010 10:36:00 AM
Wow amazing :)
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Date: 1/22/2009 6:18:00 AM
This is so lovely! Dreams can be a special place, shared moments or simply love as in this. Wonderful imagery, flow and rhyme. Michael
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Date: 10/2/2008 5:21:00 AM
As a seafarer, I AM CAPTIVATED! hehehe! You know, sometimes having a clinical wife (she's a nurse) can be humdrum! She don't appreciate poetry that much! If she has given me this poem, well I could die in bliss hahaha!!! Thanks for sharing it Alana Lady Of The Sea (hope you don't mind). Brgds. George
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Date: 9/28/2008 5:09:00 PM
Hey! I like this. I don't know why but I thought of the Norwegian Lady, a statue in Virginia Beach, looking out to sea, as if waiting for her sailor to return. Iguess it's just that sailor mystique. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 9/27/2008 7:32:00 PM
Alana- So Romantic- Nice Poem. God bless Michael
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Date: 9/27/2008 2:39:00 AM
Beautiful Alana. Hope your dreams come true. Love, Shar
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Date: 9/26/2008 9:49:00 PM
Alana I for one certainly hope that anything as beautiful as this becomes a reality for it would no doubt bless everything around it - Great rhyme and flow and just beautifully written - God Bless
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Date: 9/26/2008 12:30:00 PM
What a sweet word picture you painted.....Thank God for dreams. Blessings, Janice
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