Dreadlocks

Friday, October 23, 2009


Most unusual clouds this morning
They look like dreadlocks turned 
Gray with streaks of red and pink

Certainly a sky blue sky where 
There are no clouds
I see this as beauty but no one

Told me it is beautiful so who is
Observing this scene through my
Eyes saying this is beauty

There is an order to everything
Flowers have certain number
Of petals with leaves arranged

The human eye sees the order
The eye says this is beauty
Who made these so that they see

The ball of sun is showing 
Radiating it's glow on the scene
Seen only through the trees

That are silhouetted but not
Totally black just dark
Outlines with sun peeking

Roosters greet the day 
With their cock-a-doodle-do
How are you?

Responsiblility calls
Thank you for this time
To commune with God

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 10/28/2009 11:10:00 AM
Sara, I see dreadlocks every day, my partner wears them lol, it is a lovely poem, god gave us the eyes to see, so we will carry on creating beauty with thought, as he gave us his image, he gave us his power of thought love Simone
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Date: 10/27/2009 2:36:00 AM
Excellent write I loved the first stanza. Very descriptive. Keep writing
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Date: 10/26/2009 11:57:00 AM
Wow! Beautiful visual, lovely sentiments. Very touching, smile. Read it twice. Truly enjoyed. Keep writing! Love Light Truth Patty
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Date: 10/26/2009 7:29:00 AM
Hi Sara! I've seen "Dreadlock" skies like you have described. I have even photographed a few. They are GLORIOUS!!! Thanks for your comments. Love you. Dane
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Date: 10/26/2009 7:12:00 AM
Beautiful observations of the wonders of God's creation, shows the love connection you have with God, the source of all creation, in his one Spirit. As we maintain the purity of love's connection, ther will be many gifts of the Spirit manifests through us. Sincerely, Love, Moses
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