Dreading a Tempest

Eurybia casts a bold dare Within ticks, wreck of sea redeemed; To calm the dread upon my face. Ahead I lay on tips of shore The buoyant glide of milder waves Is tamed, as siren’s drawl allures, That even ravaged ghost behaves While steering me by the coast, she leaves. I wake to feel a heady scent Lips tasting salt of restful night, Away from ghostly hunts that infest; Till crystal rays snap dream’s delight Yet in my thoughts, her mystique heaves. *Eurybia (Yu-wriy-bi-yah)--- Greek goddess of the mastery of the seas, including the rise of the constellations, seasonal weather, and the power of the winds. For Giorgio V.'s Fantasy! (Allegory - Symbol) Contest by nette onclaud
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Deschler Avatar
November 18, 2013 at 8:04 PM
A very mysterious and interesting poem, Nette! I enjoyed this wonderful write! Congratulations on your well deserved win!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem. I appreciate it very much!
A   Avatar
November 18, 2013 at 6:10 PM
Nette, . ;) Congratulation, on your winning fantasy poem... Sending Smiles. *LINDA*
Mehta Avatar
November 17, 2013 at 11:58 PM
Congratulations on the fine win, nette
Dunn Avatar
November 4, 2013 at 2:56 PM
This poems has an errie flavor about it that appeals to my dark side i enjoyed the write and it's criptic feel to it. Very cool write here great job. and I'm glad you enjoy my write thank you for the comment. cheri
Mcdaid Avatar
November 4, 2013 at 9:04 AM
delightfully beautiful piece
Hamilton Avatar
November 4, 2013 at 6:09 AM
hi Nette you have captured well a tempest. lovely write Ty for your review on Men I have been ill so am far behind on answering remarks. Shadow x smile
Sivey Avatar
November 3, 2013 at 6:55 PM
This is a charming write, full of delight all throughout, I love this my friend! I truly enjoyed reading this amazing poem here this evening! What a powerful piece, fantastic Nette, Great Work!!
Manassian Avatar
November 3, 2013 at 11:53 AM
This enchanted me no end......How captivatingly beautiful......
Devnath  Avatar
November 3, 2013 at 11:26 AM
A great picture of wind's action. You do always excellently, my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Tacito Avatar
November 3, 2013 at 9:02 AM
Absolutely wonderful! Some very gripping lines. Great story!
Casto Avatar
November 3, 2013 at 8:38 AM
The range of your language is really powerful. A surreal, out-of this-world experience for me.Thank you!
Mehta Avatar
November 3, 2013 at 8:21 AM
You have maintained nice rhythm, nette
Andresen Avatar
November 3, 2013 at 8:07 AM
- Love your beautiful poem Nette, this was very special! - Have a relaxed Sunday .... tomorrow is Monday .... work calls! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Sathasivam Avatar
November 3, 2013 at 7:30 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed. Trf
Goff Avatar
November 3, 2013 at 7:10 AM
I can hear you reading this! Nette! Thanks! Jimbo
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