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Dreadful Hardship

Daring people with an imperfection in their stars I was hit back by jerks who left me with many scars. They are often harmed as a piece of their giving regards I had no idea they are used to look for power and starves. These disastrous people are without snobs. You'll always be unable to haul them out of their snarls.
Written: August 14, 2021
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Shaw Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 11:20 AM
Lasaad, a brilliant masterpiece you have written via this Monorhyme, I see so many metaphors sparking right out of it, a poem well done, Sir . . . : )
Buhagiar Avatar
August 15, 2021 at 1:41 AM
I have written some monorhyme but my imperfect English makes it difficult.
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August 15, 2021 at 9:15 AM
Your English is flawless. Victor, I'm always astonished by your poetry and how beautifully they're written.
Skelly Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 5:38 PM
Hello Lasaad, reading through your poems. I have yet to tackle a monorhyme..Delice
Poet Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 8:19 PM
Thank you so much, Delice. I appreciate your kindness and your profound thoughts. Have a safe and blessed weekend.
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August 14, 2021 at 9:49 AM
A fine Monorhyme Lasaad…… Beware the sharks with their unkind remarks… Belle
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August 14, 2021 at 10:34 AM
Thank you so much, Belle. I appreciate your kind words and advice. Blessings and a great weekend
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