Dreadful Hardship

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Daring people with an imperfection in their stars I was hit back by jerks who left me with many scars. They are often harmed as a piece of their giving regards I had no idea they are used to look for power and starves. These disastrous people are without snobs. You'll always be unable to haul them out of their snarls. Written: August 14, 2021

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Indiana Shaw

Date: 8/20/2021 11:20:00 AM

Lasaad, a brilliant masterpiece you have written via this Monorhyme, I see so many metaphors sparking right out of it, a poem well done, Sir . . . : )

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/15/2021 1:41:00 AM

I have written some monorhyme but my imperfect English makes it difficult.

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/15/2021 9:15:00 AM

Your English is flawless. Victor, I'm always astonished by your poetry and how beautifully they're written.

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 8/14/2021 5:38:00 PM

Hello Lasaad, reading through your poems. I have yet to tackle a monorhyme..Delice

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/14/2021 8:19:00 PM

Thank you so much, Delice. I appreciate your kindness and your profound thoughts. Have a safe and blessed weekend.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 8/14/2021 9:49:00 AM

A fine Monorhyme Lasaad…… Beware the sharks with their unkind remarks… Belle

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/14/2021 10:34:00 AM

Thank you so much, Belle. I appreciate your kind words and advice. Blessings and a great weekend