Dread

What is it about dread that controls us?  The mixture of fear and loathing that 
consumes the contents of an empty bottle, longing for concentration and proof.  
Do we confuse the child within with the promise of loving past?  To be trapped in 
the closet crying insinuates passion that is manifested through burden of truth.  
Fallen is the plight of earthbound angels with clipped wings of faith.  Paralysis 
inhibits the quest of sequestered fanaticism and belief.  Eaten by earthly gilded 
belief.  Why does the clock taunt the merciful memories of divine imagery?  Why 
must that price be paid to know isolation?  From birth the struggle defines and 
outlines the matrix of conflicting souls.  The constant crash and collision of 
innocence tainted by truth.  This feeling is certain and intoxicating.  No truth could 
be truer.  No faith could be more devout.  The absolution of death disembowels 
the continuance of self-repair.  Does the collar impair judgment or empower 
concentration?  Can the songs of holy impunity comfort like the caress of a 
mother?  Will the tears drown unselfish giving?  

The answer is simple. 
The journey is hard.  
The gift is reverence. 

 Light, when will I learn the lesson?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007



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Date: 2/9/2011 4:25:00 PM
Congratulations on winning in the contest.
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Date: 1/23/2011 3:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 1/18/2011 8:45:00 AM
Congrats Justin on your wonderful win in the Dark Prose contest with this sensational write and entry.. enjoy your top ten success with luv..
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Date: 1/16/2011 2:05:00 PM
ahhh excellent..when? when you learn Death does not disembowel Life ;) wonderful write most "charged" snapping to bite back! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 1/15/2011 2:16:00 PM
Congratulations on the well deserv ed win in the contest, Justin
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Date: 1/15/2011 10:19:00 AM
Congratulations to you for your win Justin in Catie Lindsey's contest "Dark Prose". Love, Carol
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Date: 1/14/2011 7:26:00 PM
sounds like a self conflict here, knowing what is needed but too stuck in dread. Very deep writing. Great win! LUv, Andrea
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