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Line Inspiration Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Joseph May
Line2. Tangerine sunsets composing chrysanthemum hymns

     

An evening breeze tickles the leaves on trees; and an ancient oak tree creeks, sighs, and heaves. As silhouettes merge, they soon disappear, and the owls and bats advance their premiere. A symphony of saffron and chiffon composes a sunset drawn in crayon. Tangerine and orange clouds, thick as cream, sculpt the sky as in a fantasy dream. A scarlet sun bleeds, tinting the sky pink, as shadows swim toward pools of black ink. Indigo flows to an ebony sea, where twinkling stars shine like gold filigree. A golden moon rises at Dusk's bequeath and Luna's light beams at the world beneath.

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Date: 5/5/2024 2:07:00 PM
Congrats on your win Emile, Nicely penned
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/5/2024 2:10:00 PM
Thanks, Joseph; as always, I welcome the placement and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/4/2024 9:49:00 AM
Dear Emile, this is such a delightful read full of artistic, vivid colour. Such a beautiful scene has been painted for the reader to marvel at,’ Tangerine and orange clouds, ‘ ‘ scarlet sun bleeds’ ‘ indigo flows’ ‘ golden moon’. Exquisitely written. So enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/4/2024 4:10:00 PM
Thank you, Christina, your words have brought a smile to my day, my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/29/2024 4:04:00 PM
Hello Emile, oh , you paint a beautiful scene with your words. This will be my fav. my friend. enjoy your evening./Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/30/2024 10:11:00 AM
Hello Emile, You are welcome. I hope all is well with you my friend. Enjoy your day. /Darlene/
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/30/2024 8:03:00 AM
Thanks, Darlene; as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

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