Drawing Nigh

I looked up into the sky
Dreamt of a world entirely of mine
The twinkling stars engulfed in the 
pitch black ocean 
My avidious eyes gleaming to see them
To be known
In a world unknown ,the time flew abide 
and the black ocean soon turned white 

Again I looked up into the sky 
But this time the world was gone 
And the dream was over
Soon , I realised the black night 
Changed white
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March 29, 2023 at 6:10 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you.
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