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Draw Weight

Draw weight heavy sin
Invisible archer fires
God above begged

Listen to the hums
And the whistles above too
He never misses

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Russell Sivey

January 9, 2014 at 10:45 PM

Sin in the world is worst thing that has ever happened to the human race! I wish we never had that first sin, that Adam and Eve resisted Satan, so we could all still be in the garden of Eden living right next to God. But that isn't what happened, they did sin, and mankind was destined to all sin! We know when it's coming like you said, and we know when we are hit, and we fall and must be picked up to carried on! I surely loved reading this fascinating poem my friend! Excellent Work!!

Sara Kendrick

January 9, 2014 at 4:49 PM

Sin is a heavy weight for sure but the forgiveness and mercy of God outweighs any sin..Enjoyed reading your faith based work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Yes, you are right about the control and one being freed from the burden of it..Sara